It is definitely not a good story. Too strange. Why am I so strange? I fear that crazyness transpires from everything I do. Even the fun relaxing creative stuff. I cant seem to work on a deep level and efficiently at my written word these days. Not last night anyway. The text is a bit nutty and not well written in good english. My inlaws are not replying to my emails anymore so I cannot wait on them to give me feedback. The text is absurd. Kind of crazy and not that interesting. I am discouraged a bit with that last written exercise. I better stick to poetry for now. I seem to have lost the creative fiction spark. And my english is poor.