So far, three reactions. Brian dislikes it (too preachy). Mom sees it as rebirth. And dad likes it, and finds it well written. I sent it to my inlaw sister, my other sister and a pen pal friend. We'll see what they think. I myself I am puzzled by this text. It ends weird. With a weird advice to join Saint Valentin town for a while and understand what birds talk about in the future..wild stuff! lol

The fan is working and a cool wind is cooling me off. I am hungry. I will eat a banana. It feels good to write a short story, though it is mighty strange that one. I obviously did not know how to end it.