Maybe it is because I am too tired from lack of sleep last night, but I think the story got better both in french and in english. I am almost satisfied for now by the work I put in (about 17 hours for two versions , one in french, one in english but they are only 3 pages each! I seem rusty!). It is not too crazy though a bit disgusting to have nuclear wind be beneficial. Its a twist, lets put it that way, a twist to a tragedy in science fiction.