There is a lot that could be developed from this short 4 page story. I don't know if I want to work on this text to lenghten it to 10-15 pages... Or to write a short youth novella...Hubby says there is a lot of potential for a longer version in this short text. He wanted more of a backstory. And an exploration on why the bears are green, where they come from (their camouflaged planet?), why the bears talk, relationship with earth bears with space bears, who are the four humans (develop their character and perosnalities) etc etc.