Yup, writing for 11 hours has really wired me up! Hubby has the strangest criticism (like how in a sci fi story , protagonist never having name, and meditating instead of thinking to communicate between each other, was impossibly incomprehensible...I dont understand. this is sci fi: any mode of mind body problem is allowed!). i have read way wilder conditions in science fiction and story contexts. Some other criticisms I took in account but he always wants my stories, 4 pages to fit on a print cards, to be longer. This last one, In times of war, do like the kids: A story letter from the Pacific by Lilou Volage dite Sage is now 8 pages, 6 pages story.