I really wish I could have a professional native speaker review the text. My friend Pete Budle, a rhinoceros party candidate nearby, edited two of my short stories and did a splendid work: it reads much easier and better.

The short fiction set in a west coast shelter for dogs is okay I think. But the bio in english is akward.

UPDATE

BJG read it and discussed that he thought it sounded more like notes than a narrative story.

So i changed a few chornological things from the text that were not sound.

Shortened a few sentences. Punctuation is still hiffy though.

But it is much better, both in French and in English.