He whines as if he complained, that it is like a 'memorial' and the cat is too spectacular or something...However,when pressed, he did say it was a tear jerker. I took away many christian overtone he did not like.

The story is thus being reworked. I did about two hours or three tonight on it, on and off.

I sent many older versions of the story around. the french story easily accessible is also very old, a few days.

I have added a peculiar last sentence. I am pondering it right now to know exactly what it means....ah!