He says it 'reads like a memorial' and there is no plot.

But he also understands that it is grieving that led me to write it so he stays polite.

I guess it is not a very good story. One of my boring ones.

It is sad, maybe that is why. Hubby said it was a tear jerker.

I am not sure about the last sentence , added last night...I am not sure it makes much sense. 'And maybe all this is the real magic in the end!'. What does everyone else think?